Friday, October 13, 2006

proposal

It was a very tiresome day. I was too exhausted to work any more. Bell rang giving me a new venture to explore and get out of the work. I ran to open the door and see who it was. As I expected a key to my hearts lock, one of my close friends.

As the weather outside was calm and cool, he offered me a ride. We parked the vehicle near the big wall. The big wall before me seemed like a end, as my hectic daily life. He took me high on the bridge, from where I could see the wonderful sea as beautiful as life. We decided to walk towards it. It was dark by then; we were walking along the seashore as cold waves washed my feet. I froze when the chillness struck me; I held his hands tight close to my heart. When I realized what I was doing, I glanced at him…


I stumbled in my heart receiving such a look from him. It made me wonder, so many thoughts. I stood there still. Unable to speak. He started walking fast, I couldn’t keep in pace with him, he was suddenly running away from me. I felt the sky was heavy above me. The sea is un-seemingly vast calling me to join it and promising to make me one among the stars. I sat blank, tears rolled down my cheeks. Just felt, all my dreams have shattered. His thoughts made me recluse, who knows when the love will strike.

In the moonlight, I saw a shadow in front of me, turned back to see who it was. A bunch of roses were in front of me, he was on his knees to propose me.. there was no time to talk, its was silence all round. All of a sudden , I felt his warmness running through my heart when my cold lips was on his.

6 comments:

Senthil said...
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Senthil said...

Hey anusha! ur story is damn cool..y were u not a part of any extra currics/clubs in coll..n is it a story..?! ;)

Ragesh said...

Really touchy dude, well written, so natural esp the last line, (thought it should have been "cold lips WERE on his" ;).. keep writing..

Ragesh said...

btw its warmth dude, not warmness

Vamsee said...

Good write up...but who is this "he" lol

Anu thati said...

that "he" is yet to come in my life.. will let you know as soon as ha comes!! :)